good effort binny! you wont believe it! i have been working on a similar kind of a story man..... but ya its different in many other ways... its a good first step binny. story is little scattered but your attempt is appreciable. do more shorts binny... and discuss the stories with people whom you think are good and get the feedback. that will help you with taking right decisions in fine tuning the story. nevertheless, great effort binny. all the best!
good effort binny! you wont believe it! i have been working on a similar kind of a story man..... but ya its different in many other ways... its a good first step binny. story is little scattered but your attempt is appreciable. do more shorts binny... and discuss the stories with people whom you think are good and get the feedback. that will help you with taking right decisions in fine tuning the story. nevertheless, great effort binny. all the best!
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